second round of feedback

In today's lesson the class watched our film again and here is the feedback we recieved:

The sound track we used for one section was hated by everyone , saying it didn't fit and killed the mood.

They also said the footage we had too many gaps. 

to fix this, we have taken out the soundtrack and are editing in footsteps to fill the gap.

Were also going to use editing and post production to make the film run as smoothly as possible